Reinmarana'o Mikotoyuki

Character Info
Character's Name: Reinmarana'o Mikotoyuki
Age: Looks around 17
Gender: Female
Race: Fallen Angel
Bloodline: Fallen Angel
User Type: Spirit Energy
Appearance
• Height: 5' 9"
• Weight: 135 lbs.
• Eyes: Emerald green eyes, with long black eyelashes
• Hair: White Blonde shaggy, elbow length. Has three braids
• Body Type: Fit, large breasts
Personality: Reina is calm, taciturn, level-headed and analytical, preferring not to engage in combat; she is content with silently observing both parties until the fighting reaches its conclusion, and refuses to fight unless she is challenged or ordered by her superiors. She strongly opposes the notion of killing others, especially if done to gain power. However, when she is betrayed by another angel, Reina angrily attacks him, showing that, while rare, Reina can be quite aggressive and brutal.
Extra Info:Reina has messy shoulder length light blonde hair, with three braided locks at the bottoms. Her eyes are a dark emerald green, with dark black eyelashes and dark brown thin eyebrows. She has very tanned skin, and is well toned. She wears a white jacket that has a collar covering the lower half of her face. The bottom of the shirt ends just above the bottom of her breasts. The jacket has a zipper running along its entire length that is opened from the bottom upwards. The jacket's sleeves completely envelop her arms, terminating in black glove-like extensions at her extremities, resembling the appearance of a cat's paw. For pants she wears white loose pants that are held up with a black band. The sides by her hips are open, so you can see part of her thighs, thus letting her move with ease. They are made so there are no bodily restrictions. For shoes, she wears a black and white martial arts shoe made for better foot movement and gripping
Origins: Heaven
Current Kingdom: Futami Kingdom
The Background
History: After Reina's first breath, somehow she knew that she would become a Fallen Angel. For one, she didn't like to follow orders, and always wanted to be stronger. She never understood that those feelings were feelings that were considered a sin. She looked down on earth, wanting to change it, the way she wanted it to be. Though later on in her life as an angel her prospect on things changed. She came to love being where she was, and stopped looking for ways to make herself stronger. She was very beautiful with long dark blonde hair, and enchanting blue eyes. Her skin was flawless, and her wings were very large, the white feathers fluttering in the wind. She obeyed all orders, and was kind. Other angels often looked upon her with adoration, though she told them not to. Days flew by, as they often do in a place where things hardly ever changed. Then, once more, Reina though about her own self, thinking to get stronger, for her own sake, though she didn't really do anything about it. One day when she was watching the world, she was summoned to the royal hall, and was told that she was being exiled, to be thrown out of heaven, becoming what most angels dreaded...A Fallen Angel. She was confused, thinking she had done nothing wrong. It turns out that another angel had watched her while she was gazing on earth, and told others. The rumors began, and turned into something horrible. She was cast out, and as she fell to earth, her appearance changed. Her long hair became short and shaggy, and considerably lighter. Also, her outfit became a two piece, and her eyes turned green. She landed a ways out from Futami Kingdom, and walking towards there. She wanders everywhere, looking for an answer to an unanswerable question. She is a lost soul, in a broken world.
Skills and Abilities
Standard Skills: Swordsmanship
Techniques:
Unique Abilities:
• Major: Tiburón: "Imperial Shark Empress". In its sealed state, Reina's Zanpakutō, while not particularly long, is unusually wide and has the distinction of being completely hollow in the middle, essentially consisting of nothing more than the edges of what would otherwise be a normal sword. Its handle is purple and its guard is as wide as its blade, with three small holes on either end that Reina uses to unsheathe it. Oddly, the sword is longer than its sheath.Through the center she can release a blast of spirit energy. It is worn horizontally on her upper back. Her sword is a living weapon. The living companion that resides in it looks like a water horse, though it has much shark-like appearances.
• Major: Immense Spiritual Power: Even before becoming a Fallen Angel, Reina demonstrated tremendous spiritual power. As a Fallen Angel, Reina is forbidden to release her Zanpakutō while inside buildings. If she were to do so, her immense spiritual power would be enough to demolish it. Her spiritual power is yellow.
• Minor: Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Reina has tremendous skill in swordsmanship, being able to fight on almost-even grounds with somewhat stronger opponents. Reina is ambidextrous and can switch her sword from her right hand to her left.
• Minor: Highly Perceptive Combatant: While a person of few words, Reina has shown herself to be an intuitive fighter. She is easily able to see through a person's demeanor to determine what they are thinking about.
Weaknesses:
• Major: Has an illness much like that of a form of Tuberculosis. Though it doesn't keep her from fighting most of the time, it does deal lots of damage if she fights for too long.
• Major:
• Minor: Highly weak against lightning-based attacks.
• Minor:
Stats:
• Constitution: 3
• Dexterity: 4
• Speed: 5
• Stamina: 4
• Strength: 3
• Charisma: 4
• Intelligence: 4
• Wisdom: 5

I know i still need some things but i wasn't able to save

Character Info
Character's Name: Reinmarana'o Mikotoyuki
Age: Looks around 17
Gender: Female
Race: Fallen Angel
Bloodline: Fallen Angel
User Type: Spirit Energy
Appearance
• Height: 5' 9"
• Weight: 135 lbs.
• Eyes: Emerald green eyes, with long black eyelashes
• Hair: White Blonde shaggy, elbow length. Has three braids at the bottom.
• Body Type: Fit, large breasts
Personality: Reina is calm, taciturn, level-headed and analytical, preferring not to engage in combat; she is content with silently observing both parties until the fighting reaches its conclusion, and refuses to fight unless she is challenged or ordered by her superiors. She strongly opposes the notion of killing others, especially if done to gain power. However, when she is betrayed by another angel, Reina angrily attacks him later on, showing that, while rare, Reina can be quite aggressive and brutal.
Extra Info: Reina has messy shoulder length light blonde hair, with three braided locks at the bottom. Her eyes are a dark emerald green, with dark black eyelashes and dark brown thin eyebrows. She has tanned skin, and is well toned. She wears a white jacket that has a collar covering the lower half of her face. The bottom of the jacket ends just above the bottom of her breasts. The jacket has a zipper running along its entire length that is opened from the bottom upwards. The jacket's sleeves completely envelop her arms, terminating in black glove-like extensions at her extremities, resembling the appearance of a cat's paw. For pants she wears white loose pants that are held up with a black band. The sides by her hips are open, so you can see part of her thighs, thus letting her move with ease. They are made so there are no bodily restrictions. For shoes, she wears a black and white martial arts shoe made for better foot movement and gripping
Origins: Heaven's Salvation
Current Kingdom: Futami Kingdom
The Background
History: After Reina's first breath, somehow she knew that she would become a Fallen Angel. For one, she didn't like to follow orders, and always wanted to be stronger. She never understood that those feelings were considered a sin. She looked down on earth, wanting to change it, mold it the way she wanted it to be. Though later on in her life as an angel her prospect on things changed. She came to love being where she was, and stopped looking for ways to make herself stronger, and to change the world. She was very beautiful with long dark blonde hair, and enchanting blue eyes. Her skin was flawless, and her wings were very large, the white feathers fluttering in the wind. She obeyed all orders, and was kind. Other angels often looked upon her with adoration, though she told them not to. Days flew by, as they often do in a place where things hardly ever changed. Then, once more, Reina though about her own self, thinking to get stronger, for her own sake, though she didn't really do anything about it. One day when she was watching the world, she was summoned to the royal hall, and was told that she was being exiled, to be thrown out of heaven, becoming what most angels dreaded...A Fallen Angel. She was confused, thinking she had done nothing wrong. It turns out that another angel had watched her while she was gazing on earth, and told others. The rumors began, and turned into something horrible. She was cast out, and as she fell to earth, her appearance changed. Her long hair became short and shaggy, and considerably lighter. Also, her outfit became a two piece, and her eyes turned green. She landed a ways out from Futami Kingdom, and walking towards there. She wanders everywhere, looking for an answer to an unanswerable question. She is a lost soul, in a broken world.
Skills and Abilities
Standard Skills:
Techniques:
Unique Abilities:
• Major: Animal Companion - Tiburón
• Major: Immense Spiritual Power: Even before becoming a Fallen Angel, Reina demonstrated tremendous spiritual power. As a Fallen Angel, Reina is forbidden to release her Zanpakutō while inside buildings. If she were to do so, her immense spiritual power would be enough to demolish it. Her spiritual power gives off a yellow aura. Spirit Energy Pool is doubled.
• Minor: Master Swordsmanship Specialist - Reina has tremendous skill in swordsmanship, being able to fight on almost-even grounds with somewhat stronger opponents. Reina is ambidextrous and can switch her sword from her right hand to her left when ever she wishes. While wielding a sword she gains a plus 1 to dexterity.
• Minor: Highly Perceptive Combatant: While a person of few words, Reina has shown herself to be an intuitive fighter. She is easily able to see through a person's demeanor to determine what they are thinking about. Plus one to wisdom when determining perception.
Weaknesses:
• Major: Has an illness much like that of a form of Tuberculosis. Though it doesn't keep her from fighting most of the time, it does deal lots of damage if she fights for too long. every two posts in a battle will take 1 points of direct damage.
• Major: Immense Spiritual Power - having such immense spiritual power comes at a high cost to the body in the end the persons Constitution and Stamina become decreased by half its over all total of the two stats.
• Minor: Highly weak against lightning-based attacks; all electrical based attacks will cause one more point of damage per five points of damage recieved.
• Minor: With such high perception one can be more likely to be tricked by illusions when going agains illusions you minus one from intelligence when comparing.
Stats:
• Constitution: 3 |-4
• Dexterity: 4
• Speed: 5
• Stamina: 4 |+2
• Strength: 3 |+2
• Charisma: 4
• Intelligence: 4
• Wisdom: 5 |+2

A few grammar errors, nothing too major in the app. I am unsure of the swordsmanship. I want another mod's thoughts on it as well. It seems a little unclear to me, but other than that I don't see anything else wrong with it.

Okay

I will try and come up with something too help.

Okay how is this?
• Minor: Master Swordsmanship Specialist - Reina has tremendous skill in swordsmanship, being able to fight on almost-even grounds with somewhat stronger opponents. Reina is ambidextrous and can switch her sword from her right hand to her left when ever she wishes. While wielding a sword she gains a plus 1 to dexterity.

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• [b]Minor:[/b] Master Swordsmanship Specialist - Reina has tremendous skill in swordsmanship, being able to fight on almost-even grounds with somewhat stronger opponents. Reina is ambidextrous and can switch her sword from her right hand to her left when ever she wishes. While wielding a sword she gains a plus 1 to dexterity.

Okay that should be fine now change that out and it will be good.
• Minor: Swordsmanship Specialist - Reina has tremendous skill in the sword because Reina is ambidextrous and can switch her sword from her right hand to her left hand whenever she wanted. This means while wielding a sword in either hand she gains a plus 1 to dexterity.

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• [b]Minor:[/b] Swordsmanship Specialist - Reina has tremendous skill in the sword because Reina is ambidextrous and can switch her sword from her right hand to her left hand whenever she wanted. This means while wielding a sword in either hand she gains a plus 1 to dexterity.

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